CK Lynn

^Robert^ Place: Near Ann Arbor, Michigan Personality: kinda moody, picky, speculative Hobbies: writing(duh), bike riding, listening to music

Here are chapters 7 and 8, too.

I'd love it if you could do this. It's long, (the first part is 16 pgs) but I'll give you 50 pts to do it.

Seduction, serenity and schizoprenic are my favorites.

The first couple verses I wasn't that found of. The ending surprised me. If this person is so unsure about the other, how can the other be so close? It ...

'Ello, I had free time so I finished Chapter 5 and 6. I started to edit, but then I started getting worked up about word choice and asked my friend ...

This is a partial novel i'm working on. It's 16 pgs, but I'll give you 50 pts to do it.

Okay, I have a story with a lot of hospital scences, so if you could (pretty please!) answer these, or what ones you can: :?: 1. Is there a specific ...

Thanks. Working on revisions!

Hi. I'd love it if you'd crit this. It's 16 pages, but I'll give you 50 pts. to do it.

Thanks. Yeah, this was originally written chronologically, instead of in flashbacks, so when I italicized the parts I was going to change the thought parts but I guess I forgot. ...

Hi. I'd love it if you critiqued this story. It's in Advanced Critiques, and is 16 pages, but if you do it I'll give you 50 pts.

I'm not sure how to describe this without telling the whole book, but it's told where the first chapter is the present and the next is a flashback, ect. Hope ...

This was funny, but I think it would be better if it weren't all in dialouge. You can't really get a feel for the person if all you do is ...

This was...interesting. I can feel the emotion of the piece, but the ryhme made it seem silly, in a way. There isn't much thought in the poem, like what the ...